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Bark the polar bear meets Kira the hedgehog 4

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Here is the next part of the story and this when the werewolf creature reveals himself in his human form.

Chapter 4 - The chase and curse is on:

As Fang, Bean and Kira were sleeping away, they suddenly heard a loud howling sound, and they awoke quickly. But when they went to check Bark...they suddenly get shocked and noticed that Bark was missing...but as they found Barks note, they began to read it as it said that Bark has gone off by himself to find the cure for the curse and kill the beast who attacked him...but he was very sorry for being acting very strange during the day. "Aww nertz...Bark is gone. The poor guy...we got to find him and fast before it's too late." Fang said as he looked very sad and worried a little. But as the three heard the howling again...they suddenly hurried outside and began to look around...but they didn't see anything until...a shadowy figure approached from above them and attacked them. As Kira looked up behind her, the figure revealed to be the beast and to soon started to growl at her...but luckily for Kira, she saw Fang as he got out his gun, he aimed at the beast and made the shots, but the werewolf was too fast for them, and attacked Fang and Bean, but as it saw Kira escaping and trying to find Bark, she was suddenly attacked and letter out a very loud scream...the scream echoed through Bark's ears as he heard it, knowing that it came from Kira and soon hurried back to rescue her...but as he got there, he saw Fang and Bean completely hurt and the werewolf about to kill Kira. "Get your claws off her now!!!" Bark roared within his yelling and started to howl really loud within also his anger. As the werewolf saw Bark, he grin and began to attack Bark, but Bark was too fast for him and soon both beasts clawed, fanged, and fighted against each other. But as Kira hurried to help Fang and Bean, she began to use her healing powers to heal their wounds and scars...but as she also saw Bark fighting the werewolf, he was taking more the hits as much as the werewolf was. As Kira tried to think of something...she suddenly saw the werewolf attack Bark and swang him against her and they soon go flying to Fang and Bean for a good got them...but didn't knock them out. "Man...he's as storng as I am." Bark said as his voiced sounded a little rough and different when shaking the pain off him. But as Kira saw the werewolf walking to her and the boys, she quickly casts a barrier shield as he attacked the gang...but as she felt a little pain, she soon felt weak and fell onto Bark's lap.

"Ugh....I...I think he gotten me so weak when the boys and I battled him." Kira said as she had a flashback of the boys and her fight against him and getting beating by him. But as the werewolf growled at Bark, he soon began to grin as he soon casted a spell on the full moon, causing it to be a cursed moon to keep Bark and others born or cursed as Werewolf creatures of Mobius for a very long time. As the werewolf soon howled letting out it's victory for the luck...it soon vanished again and let the gang off it's tail for now. But as the shield soon fades away, the boys soon see Kira slowly healing herself but needing rest. "Whoa, that big bad wolf vanished. That's not fair and he didn't put out a good fight either." Bean said with his complaint...but as Fang checked Kira's head for any signs of a fever, he felt her head a little warm but still feeling okay...somehow the werewolf gave Kira a poison or a illness infection making her temporarily weak. "thank the heavens, Kira will be okay...but that beast musta gave her some kind of ill infection and making her weak a little...I think we better get her back to our home." Fang said as he looked at Bark and Bean with a sad knowing look on his face. But as Bark knew that he would lose control if something bad would happened to him, he soon carried Kira and said "Fang...that guy has putted a spell on the moon and if I lose control, I'll end up killing you, Bean and everyone on Mobius....even my new friend Kira...I'm afraid I'll have to be locked in the room for the nights." "Are you sure Bark?" fang questioned Bark as he didn't like the idea or what Bark was thinking of. As Bark noded for yes, the boys soon walked back to their home and decided to get some rest...but above on the edge of a mountains cave, the werewolf formed itself into his human form. The werewolf was known as Takeo the prince of werewolves. His height was about 5.4 ft, had long dark red hair, white normal skin, had light yellow/green eyes and was wearing cressent moon earrings, a long darker cape, with a white shirt with a midnight blue vest, and black jeans with silver boots. As he watched Bark enter his home with his team-mates and the young hedgehog witch girl...he grinned wickedly and said "You will never find a way to control this...once all of the werewolf creatures of Mobius are reborn and created...I shall get my revenge even on the ones who killed my kind." And so, the battle between Takeo and the Were-polar bear will go on for every night the moon is affected by the spell.

Bark, Fang, and Bean belong to SEGA/Sonic Team/ Sonic the hedgehog series

Kira and Takeo the werewolf prince (werewolf creature) belong to me
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I would complain about some of the spelling and grammar throughout the story as a whole (it's just because I love to write) but I have been correcting spelling and grammar and changed some of the phrases that didn't make sense in the context they had been used in. Enough with my nitpicking and onto the actual storyline. So far you've created a great storyline, although the whole werewolf thing kinda reminds me of some creepy stories (not creepypasta although those are becoming more of a cliché with every one I read, they're all based on sonic.exe which isn't scary)
next I'll mention spelling and grammatical errors; sorry about nitpicking again
When you say "they awoke fast" I would put "they awoke quickly" as it sounds better
I would personally say "they were shocked to find bark was missing" rather than "they get shocked and noticed bark was gone"
remove "as" in some places as it probably should be a punctuation mark or makes the sentence make less sense
don't start a sentence with "and", "as", "the", "because", etc. Basically any word that would join 2 sentences as 1
remove "but as" before "Fang got his gun" and amend it to "Fang readied his gun" It just sounds better and is grammatically correct
overuse of ellipses "..." change some to commas ","